Gluttony

Gluttony

A Poem by Marie Baskerville
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A part of my seven deadly sins anthology...

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Her curves,

as smooth as the picturesque hills we envision in landscapes.

Her cheeks,

like peaches.

Her skin as smooth as cream.

She craves more than she needs.

She consumes more than she requires,

in order for her desire to be fulfilled.

Over the years, this has grown to be no more than a bad habit.

A habit she cannot seem to stop.

She needs to over indulge

in order to stop the withdrawal symptoms.

She knows she consumes the forbidden.

She needs faith, temperance.

Like the pig, she continues this scale of consumption.

She is frequently told,

Eat to live, Do not live to eat

And still gluttony is her crime.

© 2012 Marie Baskerville


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Mic
The last of the seven deadly sins. Always struggled with the 'sin' part. Doesn't seem quite fair for some to be afflicted while others have no natural inclination. Regardless... well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Marie Baskerville

12 Years Ago

thank you out of the seven i found this one particularly hard to write..
Mic

12 Years Ago

You're most welcome.

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Added on October 31, 2012
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Marie Baskerville
Marie Baskerville

Lincoln, Lincolnshire, United Kingdom



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I'm currently at university studying english... Im mainly a writer poetry but i do write some short stories and am working on a novel.... I try to use some unusual themes in my work and keep them as.. more..

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