extrapolating a cliche

extrapolating a cliche

A Poem by mikayla baldwin
"

life is a rollercoaster

"
the wise
put on their seatbelts before the ride
the smart 
fasten them when they see 
the dull 
falling off
after they all noticed 
the empty seats 
pulling back to the station 
remembering
the train left 
at full capacity

© 2015 mikayla baldwin


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Ha ha Mikayla. I like your humor (american spelling?) here. Cliches are there to be taken down aren't they. its funny how the two halves of your poem morph into a hole (whole?)
Take cARE,ALAN
SORRY i INADVERTENTLY PRESSED THE CAPS LOC


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mikayla baldwin
mikayla baldwin

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have been writing my whole conscious life this acct has poems from years ago back when i first started and now im finding myself thinking in color again. whether it’s good or bad im glad to be.. more..

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