remains

a little bit of love remains

relationships are like cigarettes. 

lust is the nicotine.

beauty is the lighter.

time is the fire.

ashes are history.

trust is the filter.

pain is the burnt finger tips.

love is the addiction.

Reviews

[Tom McRoberts]

Beautiful. Relationships can end, but the memory will always remain and the love can last longer than it's wanted. You'v said all this without explanation, you've given the reader the pieces for themselves to put together--and that's what good writing is. Keep it up!