push me down

push me down

A Poem by mikayla baldwin
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when i was in elementary school...

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push me down again
yea i know i'm fat
i get it
my smile is weird
my hair is too short
okay i'm sorry
that's the second pair of glasses this month
but you're not pretty either
you're mean
here's my lunch
here's my bouncy ball
i'll never sit on your swing again
i didn't want to play here anyways
i'm sorry 
here's my candy
mommy help 
please the teacher doesn't believe me
if i tell again they'll hit me
i just want to play soccer with the other kids, i can't
my legs still have bruises and you didn't kiss them like you said you would
mom they don't even let me play 
why don't you listen to me?
where are you going? 
mom? mom? mom? 
dad come home from work 
mom just packed up her stuff
she's gone 
daddy's sad just like me
i wonder if mommy pushes daddy too
daddy said mommy
isn't coming back
he's screaming again
he's breaking stuff again
 stop dad, here 
i drew you this picture
it's us
i crossed mommy out for you
she can't push us anymore

© 2014 mikayla baldwin


Author's Note

mikayla baldwin
-point of view from me in the 4th grade

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Life seems to happen when we least need the extra strain and stress - and we break. We don't mean to, don't want to... try so hard NOT to - but ...we do - break. I understood each line AND all the ones in between. You take care... stop by and say "hi" anytime at all.

Chris

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wow! This is deep and heartfelt. I'm sad, but I'm glad you found a way to let it out

Posted 9 Years Ago


Life seems to happen when we least need the extra strain and stress - and we break. We don't mean to, don't want to... try so hard NOT to - but ...we do - break. I understood each line AND all the ones in between. You take care... stop by and say "hi" anytime at all.

Chris

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a picture of innocent childhood..i enjoyed reading the poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


Poignant and so well written. This really touched me the poem captures so many feelings xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mikayla baldwin

9 Years Ago

thank you :)
that was really amazing!!! i have been in your shoes before, i know what it is like to be bullied and all that stuff it sucks but at the end of the day as long as you have goals and work hard you will come out on top :) :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 19, 2014
Last Updated on October 19, 2014
Tags: poetry, childhood, memoir, divorce, bullying

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mikayla baldwin
mikayla baldwin

Miami, FL



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A Poem by mikayla baldwin



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