Work in progress :D

Work in progress :D

A Poem by Suicidal Teddybear
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yeah if anyone can help figure out where im going with this i will love them lol ohhh and i'll say it now i pretty much ripped a line from twilight :D xx

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Sick and tired of being over looked

Why is it never me

Why does no one see

i just want someone to be hooked

 

the ones that pay me any attention

well thets no go there

 

In another life in another world

am i yours

do you look at me and not her

 

What is it about you that draws me in

your scent, your smile, your kindness

everything about you

im intoxicated by your very pressance

 

How long till i have you

or maybe someone close would do

 

I ask you are you happy you say yes

it kills me inside to hear you say this

I''ll wait forever if i have to

even if i die before i get you

© 2009 Suicidal Teddybear


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this is bits and pices put together so it wont flow but i'll fix the gramtical misstakes :D

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Added on April 27, 2009

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Suicidal Teddybear
Suicidal Teddybear

Plymouth, United Kingdom



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Guhh well... where to start my life is prety much always an episode of eastenders lmao. umm well im nice talk to me if you want :D, umm yeah ask me anything and i'll reply i always reply lols, .. more..

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