Dreaming

this is like about Celebs and stuff or just people out of your reach :( xx

Everyone must crave your attention

Your as sweet as can be

I know you dont care

It's just not fair

That we will never be

 

But i sit and i dream

Like all the other girls

Will i ever be yours?

This is just a dream

No matter what it seems

Its just a dream

 

Some nights when im on my own

I long for your touch

And think of the things we could do

I wish i was in yoru arms

And to be in your heart forever

 

But i sit and i dream

Like all the other girls

Will i ever be yours?

This is just a dream

No matter what it seems

It's just a dream

 

What do i have to do for you to see

We were ment to be

Its s clear

When your near me

I know this is right

Why put up this fight

 

But i sit and i dream

Like all the other girls

Will i ever be yours?

This is just a dream

No matter what it seems

Its just a dream

Reviews

[SamBug]

I really enjoyed this peace. It pretty much described one of those typical love crushes. It has so much meaning and you put a lot of emotion in there. I could feel it running through my bones. It was creative and amazing. Keep writing. I look forward to reading more of your writing.

[Rebel_angel]

I love this hunni! It so shows all the things you think when you want someone and I think I know who it applied to most recently! But i like it keep it coming!

[Sinny]

i like how it blends with itself....

[John Morris]

You should of seen my other reviews so I don't need to say your grammar is a mess.

If you ignore this this is a cute little love emotional poem and it is a good read.

[Kizitaly]

You really need to edit this. All of your "I's" need to be capitalized. You have a few misspelled words.