Invisible Girl

Invisible Girl

A Poem by Suicidal Teddybear
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i was pissed off at never being teh one chosen so i wrote this i hope it helps anybody :D xx

"

She can walk through walls
She dan never be seen
She is the invisible girl


Did you ever see the empty chair?
Did you walk into thin air?
it was her the invisible girl


No one ever saw her
No one took notice
No one knew she was alive


Did anybody see her?
will anybody see her?
The invisible girl


All she needs is a look from you


Did you hear that whisper?
The hairs stand up on the back of your neck
That was her the invisible girl


No one ever saw her
no one took notice
no one knew she was alive


did anybody see her?
will anybody see her?


Always over looked
always second best
is she the only one?


she can never come back
no more desk to sit on
one day there the next gone


shhh can you hear her scream?
the invisible girl

© 2009 Suicidal Teddybear


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i like this, but im wierd in liking dark stuff as we both know... there was a spelling mistake of dan where it should be can otherwise really good. you go girl. certainly made the hairs stand up on my neck.

Posted 14 Years Ago


My main suggestion to you is to realllllllyy edit these before posting. Line breaks, misspelling, capitalization, etc.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Suicidal Teddybear
Suicidal Teddybear

Plymouth, United Kingdom



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Guhh well... where to start my life is prety much always an episode of eastenders lmao. umm well im nice talk to me if you want :D, umm yeah ask me anything and i'll reply i always reply lols, .. more..

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