Heart Break

the first time i fell in love (i havent fallen in love again yet) he really hurt me so i wrote and it helped me feel better

This bench is made of stone, full of lonely and cold memories.

I tell my tale to the dieing tree, filled with tears from people’s past.

My heart is cracked from the painful wounds,

My eyes brim with tears that will never leave.

I am dead and alone; bitter and cold.

I don’t need anyone to tell me why.

Its not my fault you stole my heart.

It's not my fault you never gave it back.

I don't think it was ever yours in the first place.

Yet you still seemed to snap it in two...

Author's Note

first love broke my heart

Reviews

[PadfootBlack]

LOVE the last 4 lines especially. Fantastic peice, just one little thing...
You spelled dying like 'dieing" but that is the ONLY thing wrong with it! Great job!

[Mary E. Green]

You have a beautiful way with words. I love how you put this! Great job!