Your Heart

just poem about giving everything and not expecting anything

Your love, like a red rose, makes me feel like I could fly.
Your touch, never cold, is comforting and always there.
Your face, so beautiful, seems to forever be etched in my mind.
And I know that if there was thing I could make forever yours
It would be my heart.
Your heart.

Reviews

[kaylaparis]

lol when i type really fast i honestly miss so much that was misspelled or not added. so ya the one is supposed to be there. lol i type so fast! haha

[PadfootBlack]

This would make a really awesome song! Great flow, beautiful words, i love it!

[Mary E. Green]

Another great write! Only thing is this line
"And I know that if there was thing I could make forever yours"
^ one
should be inserted between "was" and "thing" right?
I am looking forward to reading more of your work!