The Monster Inside

The Monster Inside

A Book by Kaylamarie5101
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Aurora, a seventeen year old, faces many struggles in here daily life that eat her away. She holds a secret, though, and she needs to find a way to deal with it before it is too late.

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© 2014 Kaylamarie5101


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Kaylamarie5101
This a work in progress, do you have any tips to improve my writing?

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Hi Kayla,

The introduction has a typo. "here daily life" should be "her."

I would personally rephrase "eat her away" to "eat away at her." Now it something is literally eating her away, then it wouldn't be appropriate to change it.

I look forward to reading more.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on March 26, 2014
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Tags: Monster, Depression, Sadness, Family, Abuse, Unhealthy home, Teenagers

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Kaylamarie5101
Kaylamarie5101

St.Albans, VT



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I'm a seventeen year old girl, who is living in metephores. I've just started writing, and I'm hoping to improve my skills! more..

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