You Killed Me.

These woods,

Burn.

Flames making the smoke.

It surrounds me.

Burning at my body.

I fall down.

Coughing.

Screaming.

Dying.

I cry out.

You don't care,

But I cry to you.

Becoming sore.

Burning up,

But breaking down.

I have no more fight.

I cannot breathe.

I see the world through flames.

I feel the world through pain.

I scream at the world with tears.

I cry out.

You don't answer.

Alone.

Wrapped in flames.

Spit out at you,

But you just laugh.

You ripped me up.

Tore me down.

Now these flames confine me.

I love you,

You killed me.

Reviews

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

i feel you kayla....i know exactly what you mean.....we all have to many broken hearts in our life time and to tell the truth it won't go away..... BTW good job on the poem...

[kaylabear500584]

Thank you very much.. This is how a broken heart can feel.

[Denise Deas]

Wow. This is quite intense. I feel you, see what you are feeling your imagery is wonderful I feel this pain.