A.M

it 1A.M

and her mind is dragging her under, yet again.

she doesn't know what it is about the night time

like it's a completely different world

but something about the sunset

that gives her both awe, and fear.

as if her demons set their alarm to come out all at the same time.

and sunrise only makes her feel saddened 

because she knows that'll it'll eventually have to set again

no matter how bad she begs it to stay.

her mind wanders everywhere,

some scary places

and others are so beautiful,

its 1:30A.M

and her mind is wandering to the scary parts

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

It was great reading your mysterious writes. Of fright and night time and the awaiting of the sunrise and start of a new day which still scares her anyway for fear grips her as the night falls upon us all.

[krystle]

wow, yes I very much enjoy your comments as well! thank you:)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Mysterious dark but beautiful.
I loved it!!!
:)

[krystle]

thank you!

[MomzillaNC]

An angst-ridden write, moving away from hope to that dark place.

[Leslie Philibert]

Enjoy this ; this has a confessional or autobiograhical feeling,so it works as real and sincere, good write

[krystle]

Thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the thoughts in the poem. Left the reader with visions and things to ponder. I liked how you had the feel of mystery in the poem.
"but something about the sunset
that gives her both awe, and fear."
Above lines I enjoyed a lot. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[krystle]

Thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.