you

it wasn’t until you grabbed her by her wrist and ignited a fire inside of her that she didn’t know existed. It wasn’t until your eyes met hers and in that moment she forgot everything about who she was before you, and who she would be after you. She hoped there wouldn’t be an “after you”. She hoped she could experience life with the one who gave her so much of it. But also, broke everything in his path leaving her to wonder, ‘do I even care to be put together?’ It wasn’t until that thought, that she caught a glimpse of her very own nightmare unfolding infront of her. It’s scary really, knowing there is someone in this world who causes the collision in your veins to overpower your mind. It wasn’t until she felt more than blood pumping through her. She felt curiosity, desperation, aggrivation, you. you have taken over her veins and caused her blood to be toxic to her heart, a heart that once pumped life, and now only pumps the memory of you.

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

excellent descriptive one hell of a write amazing what we can do when we put our minds to it. I found this incredible and well thought out You must be hiding the magic pen.

[krystle]

wow oh please don't make me sound better than I am haha means so much thank you!

[Leslie]

So so beautiful and well written.

[krystle]

Ah thank you!

[Leslie Philibert]

Fine job, that reminds me of the final scene of God With The Wind..this an image full of drama!

[krystle]

thank you!

[MomzillaNC]

Interesting. . . . . . :D

[krystle]

thanks......

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful story of love in the poem. The good description took the reader to good places and hope. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[krystle]

thank you!

[krystle]

thankyou !!