unseen art

there are so many ignored things in this world
that are so beautiful it hurts;
the way a lake, if you wake up early enough, is still and quiet with the reflection of the rising sun meeting it’s surface.
the way a person who has every reason not to, throws their head back with the most genuine laugh
waking up to a world so quiet you can almost hear the sun rising
or being awake so late you can feel the moon radiating it’s light on every tear, going down every cheek, at 2 A.M
or my favorite, 
the way your eyes widen when you talk about the things you love,
even if i’m not one of them.

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

This is such a wise write to bring out the things he loves even if your on one of them but time can change that relationships take time to develop and watch hearts grow together Love is worth fighting for and extending a hand is your first plan remember nothing ventured nothing gained. Love is a risky business. So is life but we must live it before we die alone.

[krystle]

I agree completely :) thank you for the review!

[Another Relic]

This shows you have a strong sense of observation to the world around you. Photographers are like that. Good poem.

[krystle]

thank you :) I believe I do.

[Wórdsmíth]

Very nice imagery you`ve come up with. Liked the theory of love on "sun".

[krystle]

You're always so kind! Thank you!

[JC]

You show your aching love of the world, which is a true mark of an artist. Very genuine and honest, the images are clear and calm....

[krystle]

Thank you :)

[Leslie Philibert]

Like this too. I would though take it out of the quotation marks, like the line breaks; extreme but well done.

[krystle]

thank you, yea I tend to put my pieces in quotation marks out of habit because it automatically does it on my other blog, thank you for the advice!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem. I like the ending. Good to be content in the joy and laughter of another person. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[krystle]

thank you!

[MomzillaNC]

A very touching write with a selfless and delicate aspect to it.

NOTES:
I think this could use a more defined poetic structure… a layout that can carry the reader with a set meter through your themes.