Seeing HER face <3

#12.

I don't wanna see my life go to waste,
But damn baby girl,
You make me want to have a taste.

I would do anything to see your face
See your smile,
See Your lace.

I want to see you dance,
I want to see you walk,
I want you to hug me Like its been a while.

It's been awhile since i've seen you.
It's been awhile since i've felt you.
It's been awhile since I've hurt you.

I saw you look into my eyes,
You had to let me go,
SO fast.

IT was like,
Bam the next day,
I was gone.

Remember I love you <3

Reviews

[Vanesa Markovic]

This is a very touching piece, there's nothing as
raw, emotionally, as poetry born of love.

[David W Moore III]

Very poignant and obviously heartfelt. Nicely expressed.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is a amazing. I know the feeling of your words. To want something but you have lost it. The set-up of the poem made the statements stronger. A very good ending to a powerful and sad poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[AllyKinzz:)]

awe im actually crying!!! seriously! tears are falling from my eyes like rain drops filling a pond! love it!