I feel like a monster.

I feel like a monster.

A Poem by KayDennyy!(:
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My thoughts.....:/

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Everytime.
I hear your name.
i think.
What the f**k,
where did i go wrong?
Why did i let you go?
I feel like a f*****g monster.
nasty and ugly
heartbreaker and a thief.

I need you in my life
i never want to let you go.
i forever wanna be yours.
and i can't stop and think,
or ill miss you with all my heart<3
Your everything i need
your all i need

I lay here lifeless.
i'm becoming so numb....
i can't think anoymore....



This poem sucks...:/

© 2010 KayDennyy!(:


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I can feel how raw and pure your emotions were when you wrote this. Very palpable and real, not to mention effective.

There are a couple grammatical mistakes ("you're" not "your"), but besides that, this is a poem with a lot of feeling.

Posted 14 Years Ago


IT DOES NOT SUCK! >:)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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