The Eyes Of A Lover

To clifton<3

You're the thought that starts each morning.

The conclusion to each day.

You are in all i  do,

and all i say.

 

You're the smile on my face.

The twinle in my eye.

The warmth in my heart.

The fullness in my life.

 

You're the hand laced in mine.

And the coat upon my back.

My friend, My Amor.

My should to lean on.

 

You're my siilly, mature, caring,

thoughtful, bright and honest Guy.

The one who hold me tightly,

when i need to cry.

 

You're the dimple in my cheek,

The ever constand tingle in my soul

The voice that makes me weak

the happiness of my life.

 

You're all I wanted.

You're All I Need.

You're All Ive Dreamed Of.

You're All of this to me.

 

I love you, Clifton Adams.

 

love, Kayden Douglas.

Reviews

[AllyKinzz:)]

LOVE IT!

[HappyTaylor]

This is adorable!!!!

[Abby:)]

I like that you expressed your self and how your love is whith him.

[Mike Espinosa]

This is a sweet poem. You conveyed your emotion well.

This is full of grammatical, punctual, and capitalization errors. These are an easy fix, and crucial. As it reads now, I lost interest with the overabundance of these errors. It took me out of the poem.

"twinle" "Amor" "constand" are all spelled wrong. "Amor" might be correct in a different language, but to my knowledge the other languages spell it differently from that as well. Also, I have no idea what "constand" is supposed to be.

This is a good start. You just need some revision.

[R E Tree]

This was beautiful and sensational. Every line got me drawn making me curious to read more. I like romance especially when it is used in a poem with a gentle flow and a touching tone. I think Clifton Adams will enjoy this poem and remember it for the rest of his life.