The Last Words.

This is just somethinqs that come to mind, i dont know how it will come out??

They Call Me,
To Tell Me To Come Home.
I'm Already Stoned,
And There's No Point Of Going.
I Ignore The Call,
Let It Go To VoiceMail.
Everything's All Funnie,
I Hope You Understand.
My Life Is Not What You Think?
I'm Not The Same Little Girl,
That I Once Was A Year Or Two Ago.
Everything Is So Funnie,
I Just Want To Say,
I'm sorry for the mistakes.
I Wonder,
If you will take this sincere apology.
This Is My Last Word....

Reviews

[Mike Espinosa]

I like this. It's well written, with only a few spelling errors along the way. But, I'm willing to over look them for the character in this piece. Is there a reason why most of the words are capitalized? I think the capitalization of all the adjectives and nous other than "sincere apology" add a great bit of irony here. Intended or not, I love the meaning behind it. Very good job on this, you have great potential.