Livign life without you.

Laughing out loud letting you go'
was the best i could do, nothing better to
i just let you go
andv i feel great nothing better
then to breathe in a nice sweet breathe of air.'

Since you been gone,
Everything is so much better,
besides the random tears
that come to my eyes.

Everything is clearer,
Since you walked away.
I can cry,
but its not about you anymore.

Everything is so much brighter,
with you gone.
Everything be able to seee waht im seeeing
i can talk to be people and be me.
and no ohh you so&so's girlfriend...
I hated that."

I love the new life i have, without.....

Reviews

[KayDennyy!(:]

There is pain in it,

[HappyTaylor]

I do enjoy it quite alot, but I feel abit of pain in it...

[Mike Espinosa]

This poem is good. The emotion in it is good, but some of your spelling, punctuation, and grammar made me stumble through half of it. I would suggest a quick revision. I think you have a good idea behind this poem though. Nicely done.