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She falls to the ground;
&nd sits there;
Can she stain the carpet anymore
with the tears that flow from her eyes
she even wishes she could forget him
after she saw his closed eyes.
why did she go.
she knew it would only tear her apart;
she let him go,
he never let her go,
except that one night
when he commited suicide.
the funeral was all dark and scary
her friends told her too go;
but all she remember is cutting
the rope
and hoping too see him still breathing,
His body lay still
his heart has no beat
she screams so loud
the neighbors come over too see
the baby is awake she goes grabs the phone
calls 9-1-1
they ask whats the emergency
she tells them
baby daddie is asleep.
he's never going too wake up;
please take him away
i dont want the baby too see.
the cops arrive
while she is putting together
some milk
with the baby in her arms
she opens the door.
tells the officer;
he's upstairs.
and now thats all a memory;
while the baby is in her arms.

Reviews

[KayDennyy!(:]

i do thtat on purpose the punctuation.

[Shakespeare's Daughter]

I like the way you tell a story with a simple poem- its powerful... make sure you check grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc. :) keep writing!