Did you want to see me break

A poem about my emotions

Did You want to break me

Did you want to see me shed bitter tears

Or did you want to see me rebel against you

You can shoot me down with your words

Or you can treasure my passion for a minute 

Do I let you hurt me or do I stand tall

You command me to follow your lead

Instead, I repel

I stand tall, against the slab wall

I am vigirous

I am able

For I am not made to break

Author's Note

Just looking for your emotion through this poem

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I must relate this poem to the idea that some readers will try to "calm us down" or "placate us" in reviews when they come up against our intensity, not knowing how to react to it. It feels like a smothering cloak, but I believe most people do not mean to stifle, they're just highly stifled themselves. This is the best poem of yours I've read so far, but I haven't read you for long & I'm sure you'll be getting better & better (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Kay/Hayden]

Than ks so much for your kind reviews and sorry for the late reply I was in band c;

[barleygirl]

What instrument(s) do you play?

[Kay/Hayden]

The flute! c:

[barleygirl]

Aha! A favorite! I'm jealous!

[Kay/Hayden]

Awh, maybe you could try it sometime! It is hard to first learn but once you learn the 8 basic notes its pretty easy, i can teach you if you ever get a flute c:

[Coyote Poetry]

Been this way for many ways. Force create revolt.
"Instead, I repel
I stand tall, against the slab wall
I am vigirous
I am able
For I am not made to break"
I understand the above lines. I revolted a few times. Thank you Kay/Hayden for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Kay/Hayden]

Thanks so much! c:

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Kay/Hayden.

[Cherrie Palmer]

My life has had many moments in it that I thought would break me, change me.
Once you know that you are stronger than any obstacle you can't be broken. I use to tell the kids not to be afraid of monsters, cause monsters are afraid of me. Life doesn't define a person only we get to do that, no one else. :)

[Kay/Hayden]

Thanks so much fo the kind words, I dont know how I missed this review. c:

[Connie L. Kuntz]

I like the flow here! And the way the narrator starts out by questioning the intent of the listener, then questions their own self on what they will allow,and ending with the decision that they are not here to be broken. Good job!

[Kay/Hayden]

Thaks so much!

[Cherrie Palmer]

Lots of power, very good poem.

[Kay/Hayden]

Thanks so much!