Like Me

I wonder how many people feel like me
whose mind thinks the same
who lets there fear get the best of them
inna life guided by their pain
whose often labeled a loner
and a misguided youth
you hear these words so much
you start thinking it's the truth
who's never had a home
a safe place to go
so you just wander around the city
which ever way the wind blow
come along and take my hand
we'll get through this together
we'll make our own home
where things are far much better

Reviews

[DarkRainbowPie]

Nice piece. The ending though 'far much better', maybe alter that slightly to get a pitch perfect piece :)

[Junert]

Very inspiring. Well done.

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

I can relate to this, feeling so alone, sitting lonesome in a street at stupid o'clock in the morning, no where to go, nothing to do, this was an amazing read,
Yours faithfully, Jenny x

[Bri]

I really enjoyed reading this. I can see what deep meanings it has, Well done in portraying your feelings towards the world and how you live it. I just have a tiny suggestion: I noticed that some things are grammatically incorrect. That could just be your writing style, I don't know but, just wanted to let you know in case you didn't notice. Great work by the way. I like your flow and choice of words. Well done.

[Matching Socks]

Hey, I really liked this. I think it's a feeling so many of us can relate to but few admit to.
You've written it very well, good flow. : )

[kayamon215]

Thank you :) and yeah my goal was to do something that a lot of people can relate but i don't think i did too good at that :/

[Matching Socks]

Yeah did great kid. For real.