Can't Face The Music

I can't face the music
I go through too much pain
Drama I try to refuse it
But it comes down on me like heavy rain
I despise my life
And i hate the way I look too
You'd call me crazy if I told you the things i think to do
I carry war stories on my skin
Cuts that'll never go away
So I'm reminded of my struggle each and everyday
Especially around people
I know they can't help to stare
And wonder to themselves
How'd those marks get there
So i keep myself secluded
Locked up in my own cage
Cuz I don't want an innocent soul to be a victim of my rage
Dis is a difficult battle
And I know that i'm not strong
Only a matter of time before I'm on a bridge
And I'm whispering, so long...

Reviews

[Junert]

Your witings are so........ well not sure what word to use but they attract me, not that I link to them but they touch me somehow.

[kayamon215]

Thank you it means a lot to hear that :)

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

Again, a very relatable poem, scars can be a problem when it comes to facing everyday life, and everyday people, because who could understand other than yourself? You're not alone, don't worry

[kayamon215]

Thank you for the review :)

[Bri]

Beautiful work. Absolutely brilliant. You have portrayed your feelings in a great way using strong words. I enjoyed reading this. I could feel the emotions that you put into this. Amazing. Great work, seriously.

[Matching Socks]

Very very emotionally charged and powerful write.
Flows so smooth like a rap.
Good work.

[kayamon215]

Thank you :) i try my best to make it all flow but sometimes that's just the way it comes out of my head