Put It Aside

Time to wake up

everybody shoes and blues

sitting in jail

why'd I have to choose

the drugs over everything 

when all it ever bring 

is lies and pain

making my brain 

go insane

a lot of hurt and shame 

but now am done with this game 

i am taking my life back 

time to get it on track 

because for too many years i slacked

off

and sadly i paid the cost

messing with the piper

you'll always end up lost 

i hope my words can stop at least one kid from going down that path

because in the after math

your life will always crash

at rock bottom

with the devil cheering I got em

hopefully through this you'll stop him 

before he has complete control

it dont take long for addiction to gt on a roll

to the point you cant stop it

thinking of ending it all when you cant cop it

you just cant win

from the firs time its in your skin

you fall in love

then you start to put it above

responsibilities and obligations 

it becomes the main topic of your conversations

ain't no way you can be patient

for the next high

feeling like you wanna die

to do it one more time almost nothing you won't try

to do to get more

cuz you ain't tryna feel sore

this s**t gotchu whipped like a pimp witta w***e

fore-sure it'll keeping on slaying you

until the day it's laying you

inna casket

I ain't being drastic

you go on thinking you can mask it

but it'll eat you alive

if you don't put it aside 

Reviews

[DarkRainbowPie]

Really reminded me off a rap. Very strong words :) There's a few spelling and punctuation mistakes though, maybe check those out :)

[kayamon215]

haha yes i didn't noticed the mistakes when i put it on here but i will go back and edit them thanks

[DarkRainbowPie]

No problem, thanks for sharing! :)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I LOVE this. I like the fact that you have done this things and are telling everyone the bad side effects that it gives off. I do try to tell everyone that it isn't the way to go. Most of the teens in my generation won't listen to their parents, not even their own peers. We have to pray and hope that it's not too late to stop them from to continue walking down that road. The addiction of the drugs is probably the hardest to overcome I believe. I haven't put myself in their or your position. It must be difficult though. I am glad that you gave it up and is giving advice to those that chose the same old route as you did. Keep clean from it! Awesome write.

[kayamon215]

thank you for the review i appreciate it

[SpeedyHobbit Armstrong]

This was a very interesting poem about struggling with one's past and how tempting it is to fall into addictions, and how difficult it is to overpower them after they overwhelm you. Best of luck to the speaker

[kayamon215]

thank you for the review