Here Before

Here Before

A Poem by kayamon215

(Verse 1)
I see you staring with a familiar face
you're sassy and love taking it at a fast pace
just as I began to feel
you're quite excessive sex appeal
I surrender you've got me loose
I can't compete with your seduce

(Chorus)
Now I know I been here before
but your seduction I just can't ignore
when you move your hips it drives me wild
I fall victim to your sexy style

(Verse 2)
When you kissed me
there's not enough words I could use to interrupt
when you hold me
damn I just can't get enough
the way you make me feel is so profound
I just love to have you around
you give me joy i missed for awhile
but never again will I see your smile
 
(Chorus)
Now I know I been here before
but your seduction I just can't ignore
when you move your hips it drives me wild
I fall victim to your sexy style

(Verse 3)
It hurts to know
that was the last time i'll see you though
and that feeling scares me
what's the point what's earned
to write these words
if you'll never hear me
with you I see things more clearly
even though you may not have been sincerely
or loved me barely
I still fall for your charm

© 2013 kayamon215


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It always sucks to fall for that one girl who seems so right and flawless. We come to love everything about them, that we'd do nearly anything to have or keep them around. I adore the story you told here, from the beginning, to middle, to end. It flowed so well and the chorus really helped push it along, to keep us thinking about the certain affect the girl had on him. But it shows that in the end, no matter how much or how far we fall for someone, we might just have to move on...it might be for the best and we could always be open to finding new love...someone new who's more flawless than the last :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


The repetition is very effective in demonstrating how old habits die hard

Posted 10 Years Ago


kayamon215

10 Years Ago

thanks for the review :)
Nice, you clearly did fall for it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


kayamon215

10 Years Ago

I know :/ I guess that's life you have to make mistakes
nice clip on words , sweet rhymes simple
turn at the end , only infatuation
nice rhyme for sure

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kayamon215

10 Years Ago

yeah I think it was just an infatuation with her

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kayamon215
kayamon215

philadelphia, PA



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im from philly i just recently started writing and want to connect with more writers to improve my work more..

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