Closure

I don't wanna live no more

this stress got me teared down to my damn core

seeing my dreams crumble right before my eyes

the people around you could lead to your demise

please god let me be rich one day

i'm on my grind no matter what a hater say

i've come to far to let somebody bring me down

my eye's on the prize until a fortune's found

how the f**k that sound

if you mad now

you'll be mad forever

if you was real we could've both made it together

it's a cold world

so I remain a soldier

hoping god bring my problems to a closure

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I really like the first four lines and then the last two lines. Nice write, and nice feeling.

[Sweet Emotions]

"it's a cold world
so I remain a soldier"
That is such a great line!

[kayamon215]

thank you :)