my life

f**k my life sometimes i wanna trade it all
my girlfriend is the reason behind my downfall
I kinda always knew this would happen
taking out my pain drinking and scraping
wishing I can take back the hands of time
thinking of a master plan
blowing another dime
I can't go on living my life like this
guts seizing from your name reminiscing of your kiss
the only one I will truly miss
but it's time I be on my own
I don't even feel pleasure anytime we bone
I know i'm not watchu want
the magic wasn't real
so much depression got me snorting up another pill
look at how i'm living
cuz imma sucka for women
I hate love just because of a selfish woman
and y'all wonder why we say f**k a b***h
but you wont fool me like im some sucka b***h
that won't be accepted no more
or i'll be out the door
and i'm never coming back
tired of living life in black
that last status felt like a personal attack
I think your trains rolled off its track
dissing me is what you don't want to do
cuz i'll put you in your place
stop with the subliminal s**t just say it to my face
you know thats a bad move
I always come back harder
kill you now bury your legacy there wont be no martyrs
play my cards smarter
but I think I said enough
I know you'll get the message cuz you always reading my stuff

Reviews

[Missy Lorraine]

Wow...if what this poem says is true, you have been through a lot of unneeded bullshit. I like the poem a lot. I saw a couple typos, but that's not a big deal. The very last line just adds to the drama in the rest of it and ties it up nicely.

[kayamon215]

thank you very much and yes it's all true i base my writings off my own experiences that's the best I can give and hope people enjoy it

[Missy Lorraine]

If it comes from the heart, then nobody can judge. Your feelings are never wrong, especially when it comes to poetry. Just keep on writing...and I'm sorry about all that happened; nobody deserves that.