What To Do

(verse 1)
I'm fighting to get you out of my head
But I'm holding onto every word you ever said
Pain like this man it runs heart deep
Thoughts of you making it so hard to sleep

(chorus)
I'm not sure what I should do
Do I leave or do I stay with you
Thought I had it figured out
So why am I filled with so much doubt

(verse 2)
Do you remember any good laughs
In our horrible past
Tell me did we go to fast
I should've seen the lies in my face
You made our love a disgrace
And that's the truth I cant face

(chorus)
I'm not sure what I should do
Do I leave or stay with you
Thought I had it figured out
So why am I filled with so much doubt

(verse 3)
Is the key to life to forgive and forget
But who really wants to be a safe bet
Do I move on or keep on with you
I guess I'll go on not knowing what to do

Author's Note

starla fire delta kept saying to try to make lyrics so here's my attempt :) reviews please

Reviews

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

I think this would make a really good song.

[Kenya Smith]

i love it, it remind me of when i had a horrible relationship with my ex...excellent work.

[InsanityWriter]

Really great! You should try putting it to music. ^_^ I'm sure it would be good. ;)

[kayamon215]

thank you :) and i'm going to try

[Debbie_Philly]

Great piece Kayamon.... heartache and betrayal are a b***h... I know this too... this just flowed and flowed... well done !!

[kayamon215]

thank you :)

[eglantine]

I am uncomfortable myself writing lyrics, but I'm trying to write more in that way--strengthen my weakness.

This is a nice dooh-dah. It's a bit rough at bits, I stumbled over some wording. Good start.

[kayamon215]

thanks :)

[Lizzie Mitchell]

this is great!

[kayamon215]

thank you :)

[I, Rene]

Very lovely lyrics, stuck on uncertain ground not knowing which way to turn, we have all been here. Sometimes doing nothing is doing something.

[kayamon215]

yeah i guess that's true thanks for the review

[Holly Mason]

this is good like much the safe bet line now put it to a video so we get the musical flow better thanks

[kayamon215]

ahaha if I can find a good instrumental or find a site where I can make instrumentals I will give it a try :)

[Holly Mason]

no instruments needed just video yourself singing,rapping just whatever so the flow is there so the words become alive for us really good piece I keep reading it just want to hear it hahah thanks

[kayamon215]

only problem being i can't sing haha

[DarkRainbowPie]

Very popular subject matter, but the words seem to have come easy to you :D There's just ooooone tiny little error in line 3, verse 2, 'to' should be spelt' too' in that context. :3 Either way, you're good with your words, I hope to hear a more unusual piece from you seen, I'd say you'd word it very well :D

[kayamon215]

thanks for the review and ok I'll try for a subject that isn't covered so often

[DarkRainbowPie]

No problem! Great, can't to read it :D

[Lucien Maier]

your words are good. but the subject has been done so many times.
I bet you have something more unique in there.

[kayamon215]

thanks for the review :) and maybe I do I'll keep trying