If I die today

I'm constantly seeking desperately trying to find someone who can stay true
I stopped searching cuz i thought I found that in you
Sadly it wasn't true
What am I left to do
Got to protect my ego and my pride
My hope for happiness has just about died
Trying my hardest to not expose my pain
As I sit here writing this on the train
Thinking how much you mean to me
I was as faithful as can be
I just don't know what there is to say
I wouldn't mind if I died today

Reviews

[DarkRainbowPie]

If the spelling and punctuation was improved, I think this poem would be really good, it's personal and meaningful, I like it :)

[kayamon215]

thank you :)