Someone Else

I bet you're wondering how I knew
About your plans to make me blue
With some other guy you knew before
Between two of us guys you know I love you more
It took me by surprise I must say
When I found you yesterday
I heard it through the grapevine
Not much longer will you be mine
I know a man ain't suppose to cry
But these tears i can't hold inside
Losing you would end my life you see
Cause you mean that much to me
You could have told me yourself
That you loved someone else

Author's Note

reviews please

Reviews

[Katie Flores]

We all hate to be on either end of these positions and you penned it out well, but I think it might be good if you branched out and had some poems that maybe didn't follow a set rhyme scheme... But I could really feel my own heart breaking all over again from memories, :) good job.

[kayamon215]

thanks :) and i use a rhyme scheme because it helps me think better

[Lizzie Mitchell]

I think many can relate to this.