Demons

I'm seeing demons trying to take control of me
Everytime I sleep these b*****s trying to take a hold of me
I pray to Jah forgive me for my sins
Clutching on to my cross until this evil ends
Please tell me am I crazy
Inhaling smoke getting swayze
Cuz I feel that death is round the corner
Feeling like my own mourner
So I ask you now if I should die before I wake
I pray the lord my soul to take

Author's Note

i'm going to add more but this is what i have for now

Reviews

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Dark. I love it :)

[Katie Flores]

"I feel that death is round the corner
Feeling like my own mourner"

really love these lines!

[kayamon215]

thank you :)

[Lizzie Mitchell]

very dark
living in such a broken world,
i think we all are force to battle demons in our lives

[xxxrawr_friendxxx]

This is really good :o I really like the way you said "I pray to Jay forgive me for my sins Clutching onto my cross until this evil ends" (:

[kayamon215]

thank you for the review :)

[InsanityWriter]

Nicely done. :) the last two lines were probably my favorites. ^_^ Let me know when you add more! I'd love to read it. :)

[kayamon215]

thank you and will do :)