The Girl in My Heart

How strong am I
How much more can I take
Your cold words cause my chills and aches
Never thought I'd hear it from you
So baby we are through
What do you expect
You left me here alone
I drink so much
I needed your touch
But there's something I can promise you boo
I'll never find someone quiet like you
So I guess this is the end of us two
But you'll always be the only girl in my heart boo

Author's Note

i'm going to add more but this is what i have so far

Reviews

[Lizzie Mitchell]

I like the way the 8th and 9th lines seem to interrupt the rest of the poem seemingly almost disconnected from the rest as they change the mood to something extremely vulnerable before continuing.
In the third line from the bottom I think you might have meant quite instead of quiet?