Winter Wonderland

What ever happened to us
Our love crumbled to dust
Drugs fueled the flame
To my conventional lust
Atleast that's what you think
But you don't know what's real
Take a second to get the full view of how I feel
It was more than lust
Between the two of us
But we couldn't sustain it
Using a bottle to reframe it
Is it true that love is blind
If so why can't i get you out my mind
I'm in heaven when you kiss me
Show me how you've missed me
Take me back to a winter wonderland

Author's Note

going through writers block :/ this isn't so great of a poem thinking about just giving up please give reviews and comments

Reviews

[Lizzie Mitchell]

This is good.
Writer's block happens to the best of us.

[Nicole]

Don't give up! I like this =)

There's a few teeny things I'd change, but it isn't even spelling or word choice:
"What ever happened to us" - Whatever, doesn't need the space.
And:
"Atleast that's what you think" - At least, should have the space there.

If you have another reason for spacing it the way you did though, so be it!! =) I love the idea behind this, very sweet. Sounds like it's written about someone very special.

[kayamon215]

thank you so much and yes it is :)