The Splat

I'm being eating alive by this demon inside
But no one sees it grow
I'm dying slowly
And you're the only one who seems to know
And still you hurt me
And that makes a plan formulate in my head
That the world would be better off
If I were just dead
Don't try to save me now
For your actions are too late
As much as I want to stay with you
This is my inevitable fate
So remember me when I'm gone
As I watch you from the stars
Only remember good things
And not my battle scars
Just know I'll always love you
But there's no coming back
You're the one that I'll be thinking of
Until I hear the splat

Author's Note

This is a free verse poem I really didn't put forth any effort to make it rhyme so please look pass the flow of it and please leave comments and review to help me improve

Reviews

[daydreamer]

First off don't ever go splat because everyone is everything to someone always remember that. Second for a free verse poem it was very well executed. I think that you don't really need the line "As much as I want to stay with you" it doesn't exactly fit in there if you had something more along the lines of "I knew this day was coming" it would deliver a bigger jolt to the readers heart. But that's just my opinion.

[Holly Mason]

like it much thank you

[Lizzie Mitchell]

please don't splat

[kayamon215]

for you i won't :) was just a thought