death

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A story........ As her thick blood rushed into her small smoke filled lungs she only wished one thing, with her stomach full of vodka and rum with a side of pills she slowly got further  and further away from herself, with her roadmap scared body laying there slowly becoming numb she laughed she was calm she was lost.. with ever breath she slowly became less and less alive with her few last breaths she could feel the air slowly being replaced with blood the feeling of her own body slowly and painfully shutting down, she counted her last breaths. One two three... "Now no one can hurt me, not even myself not anymore at least" she thought to herself. With blood dripping from her wrist she was able to wright "I’m sorry I hurt you...bye mommy" in pool of her blood on the ground of the pink walled room... with the last breath she collapse to the ground and finely stopped hurting..... She was finely at pace, (well she thought she was) ....as her spirit left he dead cold lifeless body she just waited for the demos to leave her dead body too.. But nothing no demos, the only thing in her room was her dead body and her spirit along with some pictures from when she young and incident and didn’t hurt people, she soon found out that the only demon in her did leave but it was still in the room... It was her.. A little 15 year old girl was the demon....  - Kay 

Reviews

[Saanika Tambe]

A beautiful story with a strong message. We teenagers make many quick decisions which in the long run affect us badly. Its sad we are born in an era where instead of mending our mistakes we commit suicide. We forget to realize that life is a precious gift and shouldn't be taken for granted. As in the story the demon in her was no other than her own self. She could have killed the demon by improving her ways but she took the easy way out....