Never Say die

An inspiration for the one who thinks that its all over but it is never over.Keep faith in god and go ahead life is waiting for you to give you a surprise.

Moving ahead with a broken heart,

but this is not the end,this is just the start.

Many feelings crushed,many dreams broken,

this are the words that i had never spoken.

I was too close searching out my way,

but the doors got closed leaving me away.

So this is for those who think i am lost,

just wait n watch,I'll win at any cost.

My life's too long,and am not waiting for the end,

whatever may i face,will never make me bend.

God gave me failure to make life more harder

but its real time to say that i am gonna be more stronger.

Hit me hard or bleed me red,

I'll never back down,till i get dead.

so take an oath ,whenever u cry

Remember three words--Never Say Die.

Reviews

[Sagar Waingankar]

Nice one brother! Tough attitude though! It has rhythm and flow much needed for a poem! Keep on the good work! Blessings!

[Arielle Ann]

Wow that's great for a start...loved every bit of it...but in the fourth line I think it should have been "these" instead of "this"...and really "never say die"...waiting for more marvelous pieces from you.

Ann