When i saw u

When i saw u

A Story by LORD
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It was the first time a girl struck my heart and wanted to share the feeling

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A Real Story
WHEN I SAW U

Its funny that when i saw u i was in a drunken state
That day was like u struck my heart like a lightning
That day i still remember u were wearing a white shirt and a 3/4 brown short
U froze me with the glare of your beauty

Your Eyes were blue like the sea,
which hold the deepest secret.

Your Skin was so soft like a new born baby,
Which hold an angel scent

Your Lips were like petals of the passion flower,
Which hold an absolute fragrance.

Your hairs were like waterfall of silk,
Which hold the beauty of an angel.

That time as if there was a wall I ran into.
I look around and as if everyone had disappear
And for the first time in my life i was speechless
I wanted to stand there and admire u forever
Not a word , not a sound
Nothing
Just thinking about you and me

© 2011 LORD


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This was so sweet, it has some grammar mistakes but who cares it was still pretty good and it had meaning.

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Added on May 18, 2011
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LORD
LORD

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