No escape

A dream I had, figured id make it into something different

She knew something was wrong

Nothing about this felt right

She knew there was no way out

So she sunk down into the liquid

He held a gun to her back

Mumbling things she could not grasp

He walked slowly behind her

Ready for the next step

The liquid came up to her chest

She looked around hoping for answers

The room was lit but the light in his hand

She noticed something floating

He pushed the gun against her back

Ushering her to move

She opened her mouth to scream

But no sounds came out

She saw it out of the corner of her eye

Before it touched her arm

Slowly it floated by

And her body completely froze

The eyes looked up into her soul

The fear was all across its face

She put her hand down in the liquid

The light flash by her arm

When she looked back down 

It was what she thought

Her arm was covered in blood

She knew there was no way out

This was the end

Reviews

[MARK JOHN JUNOR]

very fluently written...very nice

[Justin]

very powerful poem!!!! tells a story!!!!