Subtle Kiss

It was just a subtle kiss

A swift brush of the lips

And if unprepared

It was easy to be missed

But a spark he lit in me

And a forest fire it would be

But I am reminded

No road's traveled without fee

Still, so sweet his lips were

Lush grass without a single burr

And how his eyes gazed

So steady, so sound, so sure

Author's Note

This wasn't my best, but I wanted to post it anyway.

Reviews

[Laminators Dubai]

like cake. you rhyme better than me, I don't even try. I way true liked it. glad you didn't kept it to yourself.

[Tobias Rasmussen]

Though it might not have been your best. The feelings conveyed seemed sincere, but some of your rhymes are a bit cliche.