Hatred Kissed

Bubbling, burning, with balled up fists

clenched jaws and hatred kissed.

Rolled eyes that fuel the fire,

choking smoke rises higher and higher.

metallic taste and a heavy lead tongue,

burning bridges one by one.

fake smiles, patting heads,

numerous words going unsaid.

Author's Note

Please comment and review!

Reviews

[Allen Smuckler]

Wonderful in its simplicity and complexity...too much left for interpretation (for my taste)...but that's the charm and emotion "Hatred Kissed" evokes. Sometimes we write more for ourselves than others, and leaves us in the dark. Not a criticism Kat....just an observation.
I loved your words and how they made me feel......and after all, isn't that what its all about....???
allen

[Saddam]

fake smiles, patting heads,
numerous words going unsaid.
oh...wow...I am unsaid to read it...great..loveya.

[katnisscat]

Thank you!

[Amy Cowan]

Very very good :D well written

[katnisscat]

Thank you!! I love your writing also!

[Amy Cowan]

:D Thanks a lot!!!1

[Coyote Poetry]

Direct and honest words. I wanted to read and know more. I like the short sentences bringing to life visions and thoughts by your description. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[katnisscat]

Thanks for the wonderful review!

[PoetryPenPal]

This poem is very good. On your profile, you sad you suck at poetry, but you are acually reall good! I really loved the way you wrote this poem, it is so easy to read and undersand. Alot of writers like to use loads of metaphors and dscriptive words that can mix up alot of people, but you write in a way many, even people who aren't writers, can understand. Thank you for this great poem!

[katnisscat]

Thank you so much! That is really sweet!

[PoetryPenPal]

Your welcome, you deserve it.

[Sami Khalil]

A well written poem...Thank you for sharing...:)............

[katnisscat]

Thank you for reviewing.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)..............

[Lindsey]

Okay this is amazing. How do you think my writing is at all good? You have some fantastic lines in this poem. So strong, relatable, and sounds natural but still beautiful. You have talent. You should pursue it.

[Lindsey]

BTW, im adding this to my favorites.

[katnisscat]

Thank you SO much, you have no idea how much that means to me.

[Lindsey]

I wouldn't say it if it wasn't true. :)

[Weeping Angel]

oh my od, what happened when i left?! how the heck did you write this?! I'm googling the words! This cannot be written by the sarcastic, prickly Katniss i know! Its amazing though. Mr. reed would be proud.

[katnisscat]

Thank you cripple. You rock, and that's all I can say.