Nothing Can Tear Us Apart

He always held a place in the back of my mind.

Now he easily fits into a place in my heart.

In a crowded room,

he holds me close.

I feel as if nothing can touch me.

I see him,

Everyone else vanishes.

I hear him

And all my troubles disappear.

The way he touches me,

So tenderly, as if I may break.

Our hands fit together,

A beautiful puzzle piece.

He takes my hand.

My heart is his.

He looks at me,

Pulls me close,

Holds me tight.

He takes my chin into his warm hand.

Our lips touch, eyes never losing contact.

He murmers through the kiss.

"Nothing can tear us apart."

Author's Note

This still needs editing. I just thought I'd share the original. Any thoughts?

Reviews

[Donald Cole]

I'd say ur a hopeless romantic. (me too) again, u are good connecting the dots of the feelings. sweet poem.
Don

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Ah, love as it should be felt and regarder, times piece, well penned, good read.

[Marshal Gebbie]

Oh, the all consuming, idealistic realm of young love!
Make the most of it darlin'
It's all over in a flash!

[Angel]

This is a really nice poem :) Its easy to read, follows a nice linear format and is accessible to most as so many people will be able to identify with it. Maybe it could benefit from a little touching up but don't change the feel of the poem because it has a very distinct voice :)

Good poem hun :)

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I think its amazing the way it is. I love it, especially seeing as it can describe my relationship with my boyfriend perfectly. I love anything I can relate to. You're so awesome! :)

[MariannaBeavis]

I really love your poetry :) This one is great!!!!