A Red Overcoming
A Poem by
Little Miss Obvious
Slit my wrists
Black my eyes
Help me out
And take my life
Shine a light
Show the way
Teach me how
The pain goes away
Kiss my wrists
Set me free
Slit my wrists
And let me be
Love me or hate
It doesn’t matter anyway
Because in the end
It all hurts the same
© 2013 Little Miss Obvious
Author's Note
I lost my old account
I don't remember if this was on it
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Posted 11 Years Ago
I found the last few lines very profound. Love can tear us apart so brutally at times, and can be more than hates equal. But to avoid the rose for the thorns below see's us miss so much in life
Posted 11 Years Ago
I found the last few lines very profound. Love can tear us apart so brutally at times, and can be more than hates equal. But to avoid the rose for the thorns below see's us miss so much in life
I don't think it's supposed to be about love or hate. I think it's about those who are willing and able to listen and offer up idea's to help keep the pain away. =)
A powerful and very real poem. =)
Kate
Posted 11 Years Ago
I don't think it's supposed to be about love or hate. I think it's about those who are willing and able to listen and offer up idea's to help keep the pain away. =)
A powerful and very real poem. =)
Kate
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Added on January 14, 2013
Last Updated on January 14, 2013
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