Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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A Red Overcoming

A Red Overcoming

A Poem by Little Miss Obvious

Slit my wrists
Black my eyes
Help me out
And take my life

Shine a light
Show the way
Teach me how
The pain goes away

Kiss my wrists
Set me free
Slit my wrists
And let me be

Love me or hate
It doesn’t matter anyway
Because in the end
It all hurts the same

© 2013 Little Miss Obvious


Author's Note

Little Miss Obvious
I lost my old account
I don't remember if this was on it

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~ just keep on writing... there is a better place than this and you can get there...

Posted 11 Years Ago


I found the last few lines very profound. Love can tear us apart so brutally at times, and can be more than hates equal. But to avoid the rose for the thorns below see's us miss so much in life

Posted 11 Years Ago


I don't think it's supposed to be about love or hate. I think it's about those who are willing and able to listen and offer up idea's to help keep the pain away. =)
A powerful and very real poem. =)

Kate

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on January 14, 2013
Last Updated on January 14, 2013
Tags: depression, pain, hurt, anxiety, abuse, pills, emotion, sad, confused, lost, alone, lonely, depress, depressed, depressing, self harm


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