Pain

Crying

Sobbing

Pain

then..

Nothing.

He comes out to tempt me,

Knows what I'm feeling.

He can sympathize...

Or so he SAYS

I'm on the path of destruction. 

Ruining everything I come near.

Everything I touch turns to dust.

I can't ESCAPE.

Why can't I get away.

Its taking me over.

Consuming me.

Pulling me under.

Crying

Sobbing

Pain

Blood

Reviews

[Joe]

This is a good poem. It has a lot of emotion in it, with word choice and rhythm that really make it stronger. Great job! Keep it up!

[alan khan]

i love how much feeling there is in your work.