I'm Not Going To Lie

Somebody left me here
To a world beyond my peaceful mind
Creeping up to get the best of me
And storing it completely confined.

I won't lie to you, I'm losing it
breaking loose of the oh-so good attitude
When he looked into the eyes of this child
he never imagined his angel would dance nude.

The lies are all to truthful
I am not the girl everyone thought I was
actually I never have been, to hurt inside
to miserable to be cared for, like everyone does.

I lost all faith in the world, humanity
Because the world has lost all faith in me
No one told me this ride would be an easy one
But I am left floating away in the sea.

I won't lie to you, I'm completely losing it
And I don't like to use my past as the crutch
But when scars never did truely fade in the heart
You are left with emptiness, and not very much.

Reviews

[Last Lying Look]

I really like this; not only because it was well written,
but also because I can relate.

"I won't lie to you, I'm losing it
breaking loose of the oh-so good attitude
When he looked into the eyes of this child
he never imagined his angel would dance nude."
That was probably my favorite part.
It had a neat edge to it.

-Elissa

[Michael X]

Heartfelt and well written, the flow, focus and passion are consistantly balanced, beautifully done.

[bluessadmood]

never feel sad young girls..never feel so let down
like the whole world crumbling..forgotten forever
dont blame yourself so hard..we are all weak
sometimes we all do the wrong things..thats the best we could come up with
put your head up and smile..you have all the right to be proud
i have seen the poet in you..so much talent i have seen
someone with such ability to write these beauties should never be this sad
these hard times come and go..but you will find much better days
so many laughs ..so many smiles..the world will open up again and smiles to you
you are still young to know..but everything could change in a minute..and the happy days
will be here again..maybe for the rest of life
wonderful write