Final Dance

Final Dance

A Poem by Kaotic Barbie
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amazing it is..

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We started the music, and had everyone watch
For everyones grins had to catch one last glance
For our spirits have sucked up every inch of the world
And now we are contracting our final dance.

With my hands on your broad shoulders
And your palms right above my lower back
We are two beautiful show cases
Glowing in our brilliant white and black.

Our eyes sparkle to the flowing music
As our bodys take the lead in this ball
We are the angels conducting the symphony
As I sway with your notes and I in your thrall.

We are timeless clocks just ticking to life
Blinding the world with our elegant stance
They have never seen us conquer like this
Taking over all beauty with our final dance.

The floor is our secret place, our haven
in which God has let us show our true colors
He speaks to me through his magical movement
And guides me to his sanctuary, my heart he hullers.

If our world took place around this one dance
We would prove everyone wrong
Because in this ball room we conquer and idolize
To this beautiful, miraculous song.

And in the eyes of all the others, drooling at the tongue
We open their imagination to a large expanse
Demonstrating a love that flys like a bird
and that sings to us all in our, final dance.

© 2008 Kaotic Barbie


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God what beauty this is ..yes the dance floor is ready
the lights on..and we stand ready..tuning to the music
as it cries high around us..everyone watch ..everyone grins
For our spirits have sucked up every inch of the world
Our eyes sparkle to the flowing music
As our bodies take the lead in this ball
We are the angels conducting the symphony
As I sway with your notes and I in your thrall.
We are timeless clocks just ticking to life
Blinding the world with our elegant stance
They have never seen us conquer like this
Taking over all beauty with our final dance.Wow Katie i could almost feel as both dance round and round
its like they got intoxicated ..forgetting themselves..only feeling the world goes round and round and hearts like so light and took to fly
If our world took place around this one dance
We would prove everyone wrong
We open their imagination to a large expanse
Demonstrating a love that flies like a bird
and that sings to us all in our, final dance.
God what a dance ..what a performance ..its like all done in heavens
two pure souls dancing to some angelic music that both lose themselves to a vision
never seen before enclosing them together..only
wonderful



Posted 15 Years Ago



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Kaotic Barbie
Kaotic Barbie

Baltimore, MD



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My name is Kati. I'm 20 years old and live in Baltimore, Maryland "And by the way, everything in life is writable about if you have the outgoing guts to do it, and the imagination to improvise. Th.. more..

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