Eternally

Eternally

A Poem by Kaotic Barbie
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= you and me.

"

The moon and the stars are watching us tonight
Because our minds and heart are absent faintly
But our hands deliver the hope for eachother
Our love isn't breaking, Its in us eternally.

The look in your eyes just says it all
How much you could hold me for the rest of life
With me by your side, you will never fall down
You will never be confronted with unmanagable strife.

And while the stars are wishing upon us
Your lips are caressing mine oh so softly
And our ship will never sink as long as we are together
Our love isn't escaping, Its in us eternally.

You make my breaths skip with every word
That leaves your beautiful mouth
You will never leave me in this world alone
Because I wouldnt beable to survive the drought.

I'm not afraid of the world anymore
But I am afraid of a world without you
Because a love like this doesn't just dissapear
That I fear, Is a life where me and you are through.

But as long as were lying under the bright stars
I know to you I will always come firstly
And you in my eyes is the world in my hands
This love isn't going anywhere, Its in us eternally.

© 2008 Kaotic Barbie


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oh Katie ..how lovely is all this..how beautiful
The moon and the stars are watching us tonight
Because our minds and heart are absent faintly
But our hands deliver the hope for eachother
Our love isn't breaking, Its in us eternally...wow what beautiful love ..this is
The look in your eyes just says it all
How much you could hold me for the rest of life
With me by your side, you will never fall down
You will never be confronted with unmanagable strife.ohhh ..i want to sing those words
And our ship will never sink as long as we are together
You make my breaths skip with every word
That leaves your beautiful mouth
You will never leave me in this world alone
Because I wouldnt beable to survive the drought.i think thats the prettiest thing you wrote here
but i always say that..this is gold talk..heavenly talk..very sweet talk..a tender song of a beautiful love
I'm not afraid of the world anymore
But I am afraid of a world without you
Because a love like this doesn't just dissapear
That I fear, Is a life where me and you are through.this is supreme beauty..yes never have i seen so much emotions withing few words
soaked with love..dripping of love
And you in my eyes is the world in my hands..wow what wonders you are saying..i always said..a magician with words
you sing beautiful songs..you make everyone just want to listen and i want to listen to the morning to these beautiful love songs
wonderful



Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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oh Katie ..how lovely is all this..how beautiful
The moon and the stars are watching us tonight
Because our minds and heart are absent faintly
But our hands deliver the hope for eachother
Our love isn't breaking, Its in us eternally...wow what beautiful love ..this is
The look in your eyes just says it all
How much you could hold me for the rest of life
With me by your side, you will never fall down
You will never be confronted with unmanagable strife.ohhh ..i want to sing those words
And our ship will never sink as long as we are together
You make my breaths skip with every word
That leaves your beautiful mouth
You will never leave me in this world alone
Because I wouldnt beable to survive the drought.i think thats the prettiest thing you wrote here
but i always say that..this is gold talk..heavenly talk..very sweet talk..a tender song of a beautiful love
I'm not afraid of the world anymore
But I am afraid of a world without you
Because a love like this doesn't just dissapear
That I fear, Is a life where me and you are through.this is supreme beauty..yes never have i seen so much emotions withing few words
soaked with love..dripping of love
And you in my eyes is the world in my hands..wow what wonders you are saying..i always said..a magician with words
you sing beautiful songs..you make everyone just want to listen and i want to listen to the morning to these beautiful love songs
wonderful



Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Commitment...a grand signal of satisfaction.

You've written a fine love song here.

Daniel

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Kaotic Barbie
Kaotic Barbie

Baltimore, MD



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