Build Me a Home

Build Me a Home

A Poem by Kaotic Barbie
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No room for the homeless here.

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Build me a home of final solitude
A place I have never once had
A place where cheer and love is spread
Where I can set my soul free, totally unclad.

Give me a shelter thats totally unconquerd
A place where the blankets a soft cotton
Instead of a dirty ragged towel
In the pits of the dungeons so forgotten.

The places where my heart fell, blackened
Where you attacked all good emotions of mine
Leaving me to an abode of evil nature
When my blood was meant to be a perfect align.

So I'm breaking free out of the dark cave
A place you once left me to be a burden
I have well overcome that stage in life
You are no king to leave be behind, stricken.

So Leave me not homeless In a world so stubborn
For a young gamine should not be at all
With dreams a million of miles high
A shame it would be to leave me to fall.

So build me a home to surface my feelings
To take me where I can bring full dedication
Build me a home, a perfect little sanctuary
Don't leave me behind, In such an achieving nation.

© 2008 Kaotic Barbie


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Build me a home of final solitude
A place I have never once had
A place where cheer and love is spread
Where I can set my soul free, totally unclad.

I am ready to build you a castle ..my queen..
you deserve your own kingdom..with so many
serving you at your feet..
a place for you build your dreams miles high
its a shame and never allowed to leave you to fall

So build me a home to surface my feelings
To take me where I can bring full dedication
Build me a home, a perfect little sanctuary
Don't leave me behind, dont leave me behind
wonderful sad dreamy work..

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Build me a home of final solitude
A place I have never once had
A place where cheer and love is spread
Where I can set my soul free, totally unclad.

I am ready to build you a castle ..my queen..
you deserve your own kingdom..with so many
serving you at your feet..
a place for you build your dreams miles high
its a shame and never allowed to leave you to fall

So build me a home to surface my feelings
To take me where I can bring full dedication
Build me a home, a perfect little sanctuary
Don't leave me behind, dont leave me behind
wonderful sad dreamy work..

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Kaotic Barbie
Kaotic Barbie

Baltimore, MD



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My name is Kati. I'm 20 years old and live in Baltimore, Maryland "And by the way, everything in life is writable about if you have the outgoing guts to do it, and the imagination to improvise. Th.. more..

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