Asthma Attack

Almost every week now...

Deep breaths clouding my ears
Lungs counting down till they collapse
Strange noises coming out my lips
Why does my asthma always relapse.

Everytime I swear it gets worse
Like I'm getting closer to the end of my days
Always another trip to the emergency room
Because inside my lungs the enemy plays.

Dangling about like a rager
Making more and more to fill up my lungs
How much more can I take of this
My chest in filled with dancing tongues.

I just keep coughing and choking
Their trying to murder me, these things
Craming into my precious little lungs
Talking out of my own mouth in sings.

My walking is slowed down
Because I can't catch my breath
I hope I can clear my sore lungs
Before I end up face to face with death.

My energy is falling down
I'm about to hit the stone cold floor
Doctor, come save me from this disease
Relieve my little trying lungs, so sore.

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

oh nice little breaths so sweet..do not worry
dont worry Asthma comes and goes these are trifles of life
they could never bring you down
may slow your breath ..only for a while
its just a silly disease could be easy fought
with hands of a good handsome doctor
wish i could be the one to check on you..ha ha
i am really surprised how well you describe asthma
a doctor could not do any better..ha ha
smile its not worth worrying about its a silly disease easy handled
wonderful write..

[Coyote]

yes , i can relate, I have a self inflicted smokers cough that does pretty much the same
Ironically smokers don't get asthma (dry lungs), hope your doctors come up with something suitable
meanwhile have you tried burning oil /aromatherapy? even if it dont work , better than spraying the room with chemicals

P