Stallion

He has saved me.

You are a diamond in the eye of the tiger
My director, nursing me from a scallion.
You've built my heart strong and brilliantly
For you are my beautiful stallion.

Leading the way into a blessed place
Where no worry's have surfaced upon me
You provide the love this young girl needs
And the imagination any girl can see.

Rescued me from a sad, broken home
You took me upon you in heavenly grace
No time for playing games in your arms
No reason to be ready for a chase.

For I looked at myself as an army of one
Untill you came in and raised me higher
You showed me exactly what I've been missing
The beauty of the world, all the colors of the fire.

You landed as the king of my castle
Giving me the gifts and love a queen deserves
Showing me the art of love with your hands
Tracing the waves of my elegant curves.

You saved me from a life one should not live
Teaching me to be happy in the brain of a scallion
I got lucky finding you, this precious diamond
For you are my beautiful stallion.

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

oh what lovely words ..i always say smile and the world will smile to you
you are so strong inside..a queen who deserves all beauty and a pretty life
you are so pretty inside..it just needs a few touches so you know how much worth you are
much more worth than you ever think..life could be so hard
but there is always someone by your side
you will never be an army of one..you are so pretty inside just look around you
there are so many knights..kneeling at your your pretty feet
just trying to satisfy you..beautiful Queen..you will always be
You are a diamond in the eye of the tiger
My director, nursing me from a scallion.
You've built my heart strong and brilliantly
For you are my beautiful stallion.
Leading the way into a blessed place
Where no worry's have surfaced upon me
You showed me exactly what I've been missing
The beauty of the world, all the colors of the fire.
You landed as the king of my castle
Giving me the gifts and love a queen deserves
you area beautiful Queen ..you deserve the best
your words are like magic ..so few can say and sing such beauty
simply so wonderful

[Miss Prince]

I always like tribute poems to people who have made an impact in your life, whether beneficial or detrimental. I think it's best that they be honored or outwardly scorned for their deeds through poetry, so I thank you for writing this, whoever it is.

[Wicahpi]

There is nothing more perfect then the relationship
between a girl and her horse; be it stallion or mare.
A relationship that I miss so dearly.

[Adelia Alighieri]

Magnificente!!!!!!!
So lyrically composed, and beautifully expressed.....
I loved the first line "You are a diamond in the eye of the tiger".Nice work.