Alcoholic Dreams

I actually did dream this one night...

Sometimes I dream that I am naked
Surrounded by hundreds of horny men
Me just standng in the circle, scared
Begging to be left alone once again.

They get closer and closer
With every un-even breath i take
Closing me into a stranded circle
Leaving my mind left at stake.

Just another sip of vodka and they will be gone
Just a little giggle and my eyes will open.
Hands, feeling them carress my secret areas
Why in this torturous world am I left un-spoken.

I might as well fall back and let them catch me
For I will be here for awhile
Too many of them un-zipping their pants
Fighting to melest this helpless servile.

Feeling, tight thrusts inside me
Screaming, what else can be done?
Numbness, vitalizing all over my body
This isn't a dream to which I have won.

Touch of a soft pillow
Sight of the clear bottle next to my bed
It's all because of you isn't it?
Next time I shouldn't take it to the head.

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

oh the dreams of alcohol..how nasty
always coming like nightmares
but this is so strong..
how you image what those men are about ..so vivid
some women would love this like a fantasy.. ha ha
but i could see you were very disturbed..i know
alcohol could certainly bring nightmares
and the one you talk about is one of the worst..as i see
nice work..wonderful

[Bill Grimes Jr.]

I am well acquainted with this demon alcohol........You have painted a powerful portrait of the damage he inflicts......on self esteem, sanity, peace of mind........I admire your courage to write about this often taboo subject.......Well done indeed.....

Peace,

Bill :-)

[darkgurl]

Sometimes I dream that I am naked
Surrounded by hundreds of horny men
Me just standng in the circle, scared
Begging to be left alone once again.

I laughed my a*s off at this verse, Man that was so funny, This is a wonderful write enjoyed....Kim